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Genre: Historical Fiction Main characters: Cleopatra Selene and her twin brother Alexander Helios Time and place: 30-25 BC, (mostly) Rome First sentence: “While we waited for the news to arrive, we played dice.” Summary: After Egypt was conquered and Cleopatra committed suicide, her three children with Marc Antony were taken to Rome. Because the conqueror, Octavian, didn’t want to look like he was waging wars on children, he treated them kindly, leaving their care to his own sister (and Antony’s ex-wife) Octavia. Thus Selene and Alexander lived a nice life, surrounded by friends and enemies alike, but they both knew that, as their fifteenth anniversary approached, their destiny was to be decided, once and for all. |
From the very moment the book opens (the last day of Egypt as a free country), the characters have fallen a bit flat for me. We get a glimpse of Marc Antony, whom I have rather despised (his last words were about wine? really? I understand he loved wine and horses but this was a bit too much for me), and of Cleopatra (who had too few pages to make any impression on me; she was just there, and then she died, and that was that). Fast-forward eleven months, and there is our first chance to get to know the three children of Cleopatra and Antony’s. We learn that Selene is very talented when it comes to drawing, and Alexander knows a lot about horses. Other than that, they (or at least Alexander) seem to have gotten over their pain at seeing their parents dead and have been transformed into slaves pretty well. The depth of feeling seemed to me lacking all throughout the book, and it probably was one of the reasons I did not enjoy it that much.
Sadly, the fact that I did not resonate with the character affected my relationship with the whole story, because there is very little plot to speak of. Sure, there’s the Red Eagle mystery, but I kept thinking of it more as a tangent to the story, something that didn’t actually affect any of the characters, so I wasn’t particularly drawn into that either. What did give a bit of flavor to the book was the actual historical part: what Octavian did and when, his decisions and the way they affected others, plus the descriptions of Rome in that day and age. It can be said, in a broad sense, that Octavian was the one that made the book worth reading for me (otherwise there were only shopping trips or some other form of entertaining; oh, and Selene’s pining for someone she could never have).
One of my disappointments in the book was the fact that it mostly narrates Selene’s childhood (ages 11-15), a time far less interesting than her adulthood probably was. Even the author mentions, in the afterword, that Selene and her husband had “one of the greatest love stories ever to come out of imperial Rome, and for twenty years they reigned side by side in an extraordinary partnership”; I for one would have loved to know more about that, rather than a few years in the life of a more or less ordinary child.
Speaking of which, sometimes I felt the connection with Cleopatra a bit forced. That was most likely because Selene had no particularity to mark her as Cleopatra’s daughter. She could have been any other child lucky enough to belong to a patrician family. Or so it seemed to me (while she does prefer Egypt to Rome whenever she has the chance, these moments occupied way too little space to actually matter).
It can be argued that at least Selene remained attached to the land of her forefathers. To my surprise that wasn’t the case with her brother, Alexander, who adopted the Roman way in all the aspects of his life. He enjoyed betting on horse races and going to the Circus with his Roman friends, very rarely thinking about his previous life with his mother and father. This may be only an impression of mine, since we only see Alexander through Selene’s life, but I have often wondered how could he adapt so completely to his new way of life (sure, history tells us that Juba did the same, but he was “adopted” by the Romans when he was 4 or 6, not 11 as Alexander was).
I did not yet decide what I think about the fate the author has chosen for little Ptolemy, Selene and Alexander’s brother. There is very little known about him, however there are some historians that state all the three children were at the Triumph, and all three of them were then taken into custody by Octavia. As such, I was a bit surprised to see Ptolemy not being there. I also was surprised to see Antony criticised for sending away Octavia’s daughters with her previous husband, a move clearly intended for the reader to find Rome even more outrageous; however history (or at least some historians) tells us that the two Claudia Marcellas have lived with their mother and Marc Antony for a while, so they were not simply turned away when Octavia remarried.
Thoughts on the ending: I loved the last few pages the most in the entire book. Of course I knew how it was going to end (history tells us who Selene married), and yet there was a surprise twist near the end that I have vastly enjoyed.
What I liked most: The number of real-life characters mentioned in the novel. There are so many people I learned about and I am happy and grateful because of that. (for starters, secondary cast Wiki pages: Juba, Marcellus, Julia, Livia, Tiberius, Vipsania)
What I liked least: Why is the book named Cleopatra’s Daughter yet all throughout the book the name is spelled Kleopatra? There is a mention in the book that the name is spelt thus in Greek — and yet, why should we care about the Greek spelling, since the Cleopatra everyone’s known for all their life is spelt with a C? Or, if it mattered that much to the author, shouldn’t the name have been spelt with a K on the cover too?
Recommend it to? Anyone interested in a historical fiction novel set in ancient Rome. As usual, I seem to be the only one not liking this book so I do recommend it despite my own opinion about it.
See also
Michelle Moran’s website
Michelle Moran’s blog
Places in Rome where Selene has been
Q and A with the author about the book
Amazon Affiliate. If you click an Amazon link and buy something, I receive a small percentage of the purchase price.
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